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Falling – A Poem

Written by Millionaire’s Digest Team Member: Hira N.

Founder & Owner of: The Loudest Thoughts

Millionaire’s Digest Team, Contributor and Successful Living Writer


Step onto the cracks beneath your feet,
Watch the ground on which you stand split into two.
Falling through, you reach for a hand,
You get a grasp of nothingness, a grasp of loneliness
A hint of sadness and you start to break.

As you look up to a sky that holds no stars,
No constellations, nothing to keep you above the water
As you slowly start to drown, fighting for oxygen,
Fighting for freedom.

You start to lose your senses,
With no balance of mind,
Nostalgia hits you, as the memories flood back through.

You start to gain conciseness,
Salty tears stream down your cheeks,
as they make their way to the clothes glued to your body by sweat,
The same sweat that drips down your forehead,
As you sit in your bed, pulling at your hair,
To make it stop.
To make it stop
Just make them stop.

Just make them go away, I won’t ask for more if you choose to stay.
Watch as the night turns to day.-H


Article Credits: Hira N.

Millionaire’s Digest Team, Contributor

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18 Comments
  1. zaira2901 2 months ago

    Emotional and very intense……. feeling like I would cry nxt moment

  2. Joy Makenah 2 months ago

    Love this so much. Thank you for sharing

  3. Benjamin Fastnedge 2 months ago

    Poetry that hits hard and grips the mind and senses- thank you for this inspired piece.

  4. Angie Sim 4 months ago

    “As you look up to a sky that holds no stars”- and that’s when I fell in love.

    This is such a well written poem, from the rhythm to the writing itself- it was nicely executed!

    Thanks for sharing!
    Angie
    halfthecriteria.wordpress.com

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      theloudestthoughts 4 months ago

      Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know that you enjoyed what I had written. It means alot. 😀😀

  5. lifefunwithsaurabh 5 months ago

  6. GANSU 5 months ago

    Well written and very emotional

  7. thesilence2017 6 months ago

    “Watch as the night turns to day.”

    That’s something so great that I want to do this again soon. Great poem, God bless you. 🙂

  8. beingcreativebc 6 months ago

    Loved the intensity and build of this poem. Very moving!

  9. youlivefully 6 months ago

    Touched the heart. Could feel the loneliness and hurt behind it… ❤

  10. shub 6 months ago

    intense poem
    touched !
    loved it

  11. mindelate 6 months ago

    This is so deep. Such intense writing. I loved it!

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